Alan Hudson - Roundabout (draft)

MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE · Post by **MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 3:15 pm

constructive criticism please

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=33PWJTQO

kristofason · Post by **kristofason** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 7:49 pm

I like that
maybe a few more fills and drum hits dunno,i wouldnt hav chose that kick but im me and ur u!!

MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE · Post by **MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:34 pm

yes i agree with you on both points, it was just ruffed out on live today, i made the kick so ill keep working on it, it sounds a bit boomy

Thanks alot

MarkA · Post by **MarkA** » Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:35 pm

can you upload your stuff somewhere else dude? can never get anything from megaupload

MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE · Post by **MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE** » Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:00 pm

Sound, ill sort it....

kristofason · Post by **kristofason** » Wed Jan 16, 2008 1:42 pm

How did u get along with this track?anythin new added??

Opuswerk · Post by **Opuswerk** » Wed Jan 16, 2008 2:36 pm

locked it. the highs in the intro are sounding abit flat tome, maybe too much like white noise. dunno. kick could be lest boomy, and with more punch. Some little edits here and there in the drums would also help the listenener to keep his / her interest. that distorted synth coming in is nice. Loving the way it builds u s o slowly. too bad the drop doest do justcie to the buildup.

I liek the elcto feeling you got on that track. But it still needs some work.

MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE · Post by **MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE** » Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:50 pm

Opuswerk wrote:locked it. the highs in the intro are sounding abit flat tome, maybe too much like white noise. dunno. kick could be lest boomy, and with more punch. Some little edits here and there in the drums would also help the listenener to keep his / her interest. that distorted synth coming in is nice. Loving the way it builds u s o slowly. too bad the drop doest do justcie to the buildup.

I liek the elcto feeling you got on that track. But it still needs some work.

Yeh youve nailed it mate.... it was just a piss about tbh, that was the first go at the arrangement, as you can probs tell....

Ill work on it this weekend, hopefully make something good outa it...

Cheers