constructive criticism please
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Alan Hudson - Roundabout (draft)
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Alan Hudson - Roundabout (draft)
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locked it. the highs in the intro are sounding abit flat tome, maybe too much like white noise. dunno. kick could be lest boomy, and with more punch. Some little edits here and there in the drums would also help the listenener to keep his / her interest. that distorted synth coming in is nice. Loving the way it builds u s o slowly. too bad the drop doest do justcie to the buildup.
I liek the elcto feeling you got on that track. But it still needs some work.
I liek the elcto feeling you got on that track. But it still needs some work.
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Yeh youve nailed it mate.... it was just a piss about tbh, that was the first go at the arrangement, as you can probs tell....Opuswerk wrote:locked it. the highs in the intro are sounding abit flat tome, maybe too much like white noise. dunno. kick could be lest boomy, and with more punch. Some little edits here and there in the drums would also help the listenener to keep his / her interest. that distorted synth coming in is nice. Loving the way it builds u s o slowly. too bad the drop doest do justcie to the buildup.
I liek the elcto feeling you got on that track. But it still needs some work.
Ill work on it this weekend, hopefully make something good outa it...
Cheers