I would love to have some feedback on this track i made recently...
http://soundcloud.com/rik-woldring/rik- ... t-hijacked
thanks in advance.
Rik Woldring - Rat hot hijacked
Rik Woldring - Rat hot hijacked
Elektric Salsa
First, i liked the sounds you used to compose the parts with. The sound that came in around 15 seconds was cool, though I have to admit I started getting tired of hearing it every measure for several minutes lol.
The drum fill around 2:20 was pretty sweet, and I enjoyed the new chordy stab. the bass groove around 2:55 I liked a lot, and it finally added some good new elements to a song that was starting to get boring for me.
I liked that the piece evolved throughout; while I liked the beginning I liked it more as things progressed. The drum fills, when you used them, added a lot to things and i enjoyed hearing them throughout.
The drum fill around 2:20 was pretty sweet, and I enjoyed the new chordy stab. the bass groove around 2:55 I liked a lot, and it finally added some good new elements to a song that was starting to get boring for me.
I liked that the piece evolved throughout; while I liked the beginning I liked it more as things progressed. The drum fills, when you used them, added a lot to things and i enjoyed hearing them throughout.
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Nice, I like this track. Its one of the best member tracks I have heard in awhile. I like the bassline. Reminds me of a good house party in and old warehouse. I think that one sound that that plays throughout its a little monotonous though. There are a few spots when the music changes and that sound is kind of the lynchpin to the new groove when the change happens but I think overall its a little too invasive.
It would be cool if you could find a sax player to play a few little alternating licks in place of that sound and back it up with a nicer sounding crashing cymbal or something. Overall though, this track has a great groove. Its got the a Basement Jaxx-like energy.
It would be cool if you could find a sax player to play a few little alternating licks in place of that sound and back it up with a nicer sounding crashing cymbal or something. Overall though, this track has a great groove. Its got the a Basement Jaxx-like energy.