Semirk - Back On Track

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Mon Mar 20, 2006 12:23 am

Something a bit different with this one, trying out a new style, any opinions of course welcome.

http://www.sitesled.com/members/semirku ... _Track.mp3

Thanks

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Mon Mar 20, 2006 1:44 am

was listenithe bassline...you need to tighten it up...its too floaty

and actually i dont think it fits with this...it does not..

i bet you made this and knew it didnt fit?

maybe.... ive dont it before alot...alot alot

ill put something in...and ill want to make it work so much,

your ear tells you its off, but you put it in anyways because you worked so hard to make it...that you cant throw it away....

so i would say toss it...if your ear sez its off...trust that...

dont do any negotiations with your head...your head will always betray you

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Mon Mar 20, 2006 7:56 pm

Thanks man, always great to have people pointing things out I don't recognise. I thought it was fine whilst producing (though my ears not the best for noticing these things) so will have a re-listen and change the bass to something more suitable.

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Tue Mar 21, 2006 5:13 pm

I don't like bumping my own threads but I really don't know what to do bassline wise with this one.

Would be great to see if anyone agrees with Mathias or has any suggestions.

Many thanks if anyone can help.

Robot Criminal · Post by **Robot Criminal** » Tue Mar 21, 2006 5:29 pm

at first the bass sounds cool but over the time it starts to get on my nerves. Morph it to some other sound maybe? Really difficult to say what should be done with it...

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Tue Mar 21, 2006 5:36 pm

Thanks for the feedback.

I'll experiment some techniques with it and see what can be done.

Alex semko · Post by **Alex semko** » Tue Mar 21, 2006 8:14 pm

Hi mate, can you not run the bassline through something to dirty it up a little bit or even just to bring up front as a transition from how it starts? It sits quite far back and does get a little bit wearing without any dynamic movement.

the glitchy sounds that come in after a minute or two need to come forward a little bit too - they're good but I can't hear them.

Can help longing for kick - but that's just me.

Great sounds/samples (as always).

hope this helps

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Tue Mar 21, 2006 10:57 pm

Many thanks for the suggestions there, really helpful thanks.

On the dirty up the bass idea do you have any suggestions by any chance?

Not sure what you mean by 'Can help longing for kick - but that's just me.'. If you could just explain a little i'd be grateful.