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Remarque
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Hi,

here is a new track of me, minimal techno with a lot of trippy sounds :) .

hope you guys like it, and leave a comment please!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/19360652a6026d8b/
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Post by warren888k »

good basis for a track but it needs some synth or fx elements to carry it
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Post by Roqqert »

try to make more groove with percussion and stuff. Also try some more riff's, cause this is cant hold it interesting for 4 minutes long
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Post by Vian »

i agree with the above, really cool base though.. get a good hook in it and itll be great!
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Post by Misko »

zit wel wat vets in..mag ik dees remixen??
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Post by justified »

good overall sound.

And I agree with others, that it wouldn't hurt if there's something a bit more going on in the track.
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Post by Remarque »

Thanx for the comments, i think it´s clear for me now what i have to do with the track now :P . I´ll have a look at it.

@ Misko: je hebt pm.
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Post by konradsk »

Not feeling this track personally
The mix sounds fine, but for a track with this little going on it needs to have original/rolling rhythms or some intersting musical progression that grabs peoples attention.
It just sounds like a techno template at the moment.
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