I'm still quite a noob in producing, but this is my first track which i decided to let into public so any comments are welcome!
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=OT9RQS9D
thanks!
Entropy - New Tune
Entropy - New Tune
"So the kids take a pill to feel the funk and the DJ takes a pill to feel the funk. I don't take a pill to feel the funk." (Derrick May)
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Well, here you have it on rapidshare then:Alex semko wrote:mate, you might struggle to get comments hosting on megaupload. I tried it there - waited 60 secs (which I did so patiently - of course!) and then faced 100 pop-ups etc. Can't afford to infect the machine!!!
Sorry,
http://rapidshare.de/files/16090168/untitled.mp3.html
"So the kids take a pill to feel the funk and the DJ takes a pill to feel the funk. I don't take a pill to feel the funk." (Derrick May)
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Thanks on the comment/critics!mlexicon wrote:i heard it...for a new jack, it sounded on its way
keep at it
wasnt anything special, but suprisingly there wasnt anything majorly wrong with it....
all my first tracks had huge problems...and even my new ones do...so...yeah
"So the kids take a pill to feel the funk and the DJ takes a pill to feel the funk. I don't take a pill to feel the funk." (Derrick May)
For those who won't download frome neither megaupload nor rapidsher, here's yousendit:
http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2NZR ... RJK3U6UBAL
and this is the last link i'll give you, no more uploading! I'd appreciate some more comments now!
http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2NZR ... RJK3U6UBAL
and this is the last link i'll give you, no more uploading! I'd appreciate some more comments now!
"So the kids take a pill to feel the funk and the DJ takes a pill to feel the funk. I don't take a pill to feel the funk." (Derrick May)
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..sorry for the hassles mate. Better I said something than just ignore it though...
The track is pretty good. Some of the sounds are great - nice and crisp! I think it has plenty of potential but as mathias suggested I think it could be stepped up a little bit. I don't know if it's the bass having little movement?? Maybe you could have a look at this.
The drop at about 4.30 is nice, maybe you could use more of this??
Something short and unexpected mid way-ish would be an idea to keep its edge...
Kick and perc sounds good.
Keep at it especially if you are pretty new to it!!!
The track is pretty good. Some of the sounds are great - nice and crisp! I think it has plenty of potential but as mathias suggested I think it could be stepped up a little bit. I don't know if it's the bass having little movement?? Maybe you could have a look at this.
The drop at about 4.30 is nice, maybe you could use more of this??
Something short and unexpected mid way-ish would be an idea to keep its edge...
Kick and perc sounds good.
Keep at it especially if you are pretty new to it!!!