here's my last track,just finished it...
I'm not really satisfied,maybe it's too minimal ...and i'm not sure of the two bass idea...maybe you can help me
the little synth flourishes you use in the intro are far too dry, they'd sound great with some reverb on them i think.
the two bass idea is fine, but the acid stab bass has too much stab for my taste, maybe put a bigger attack on the amp env.
the new lead after 3 mins sounds like a dj mixing in a new track, it doesn't seem to gel or transition well.everything comes together better after 4:20 though. so working on a new way to introduce the new synths/section is a must.
i like what you did with the rim shot early on, that was nice
sounds okay... the chord works really well, i like it! um, apart from that, drums kind of suck, maybe cos i got used to hear the same set in every track. bass works really well... i dunno, nice piece, you could work on some textures and complex programming a bit.
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