Hey,
The panning in the first 15 seconds or so to the left irritates me a little. A problem easily solved though, I'd suggest moiving it left and right as I'm sure it won't only be me that notices that.
From then on though I like this very good, interesting beat going throughout the track, very nice pad there too, loving it.
The melody comes in and thats very nice too, this really does have potential. Don't suppose you'd fancy letting me have the parts for a remix like you'll have with mine do you? If possible of course.
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