Liking the melody and the sound of it! The beat sounds good, nice interesting pattern, but try to give the kick a little more oomph, it sounds a bit flat on my speakers.
I hear big improvements in your productions, Mode 3 sounds good aswell but maybe try to use some longer patterns to increase the variety in the whole beatlines.
Very synthetic, has that minus sound written all over it IMO.
Well crafted, think the main synth needs more decoration over it or something else to blend to. This could be a way of developing it past 4'20".