KenWee - APT002 (Updated in first post)

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async: thanks for your advice, will try it out ;)
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have made added some more stuff into my track now.

http://www.kenwee.com/KenWee-APT002(sample).mp3

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the track is finish now I´ll think.

http://www.kenwee.com/KenWee-APT002.mp3

what ya think ? hot or not ? :p
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I love it! Super hotness!
Great work on the higher end of the tune... the hats and the snare etc are super clear. There are some beeps that are way too loud towards the middle. Consider adding 3 or so db of overdrive (experiment with the driving freq) to: the bassline, the kick and the bass-like synth. Also it would absolutely kill if you did some jumpy switch ups of the bass-like synth (bounce it to a file and chop / repeat / resequence).
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Post by async »

ooh! also, don't be afraid to compress / mix up / bit-crush that dubbed out vocal track a bit so that it stands out just a bit.
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thanks a lot for your feedback async. really appreciate it. thanks for your advice , will try it out.


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Just listened to this on my monitors. You need to eq a few things, and open up the low end.
First: if you have any reverb on stuff that has bass freqs in it, make sure to hi-pass before the reverb or you'll add to the mud.
Second: make sure to eq out some of the sound between 200 and 500 hz. Typically too much going on in the lower-mid will make the mix sound muddy.
Lastly, mix down the bleeps and bloops, or just drop them all together. You actually have a really good composition going, just focus on cleaning up the lower-mid and tighten the elements and you're good!

Keep in mind that less is more (to a point). Keep the reverb and little stuff subtle.

Your song sounds super good though! If this was clean and mastered, I'd totally play it.
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have chance some thing in this track now.

http://www.kenwee.com/KenWee-APT002.mp3


Yes, I know the vocal is very low, but I´ll think its cool with a low vocal so you almost have to consentrate to hear it.

"consentrate" maybe its totaly wrong..my english sucks. hehe
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