Track titled "Seditionary"
appreciate the feedback.
http://myspace.com/sulibelarto
thanks in advance.
[moody/mnml/house]suli.belarto-"Seditionary"
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not my cup of tea, although i'm sure there is someone who likes it tho'.
Not even Hänsel is what Gretel used to be.
http://www.audio-lab.org
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Sorry, haven't noticed your replay before.
Ok. here's the "complete" review.
1st of all, my personal opinion is that claps (if not extremely modified) are outdated and for sure sound corny. So i would add a bunch of effects on them or smthn. 2nd, that shizophrenik synth is great for intro, but i kinda feel it's not good for a sequence (at least not through the whole song).
Whole song is kinda linear, and pretty much nothing is happening. Ok, it needs to be mnml, but i can sence a lack of variations through the piece.
Song surely has potential, but you haven't made the most of it. There's a lot of place for improvement.
Ok. here's the "complete" review.
1st of all, my personal opinion is that claps (if not extremely modified) are outdated and for sure sound corny. So i would add a bunch of effects on them or smthn. 2nd, that shizophrenik synth is great for intro, but i kinda feel it's not good for a sequence (at least not through the whole song).
Whole song is kinda linear, and pretty much nothing is happening. Ok, it needs to be mnml, but i can sence a lack of variations through the piece.
Song surely has potential, but you haven't made the most of it. There's a lot of place for improvement.
Not even Hänsel is what Gretel used to be.
http://www.audio-lab.org
http://www.audio-lab.org
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