This is one weird track! I like that looping sound, creates a cool atmosphere in this song.

The bleepy sounds are cool too, but i would like to hear some variations, pattern wise.

Great stuff! You really know how to get a good 808 sound in your tracks.

As Alex mentioned, the snare is a bit too loud.

There is something wrong with your file. When i save it to my disk i cant play it... Filesize is 8kb??

Great monotone track, really gets you in a rush. Cool efx, good build up.

A nice addition would be somekind of noisy pad or sound which rises up while the track progresses. That would be real cool! But thats just my point of view.

Some dark, firm minimal'ish techno:

http://www.forcesupreme.com/demo/forces ... chines.mp3

Made in Renoise 1.5

sounds like somekind of industrial / soundtrack song ... Nice atmosphere and very cool drums!

The best delay i have ever heard is the one thats in the FX section of softsynth ZT3A+.

You can use ZT3A+ as a fx plugin

That's pretty simple: Just search for a decent stabby sound in your favo vst instrument (Pro53 would do fine for example), and play a decent chord, like a C Major or something like that and play with the filters while playing your sequence. Then add a tapedelay and lots of reverb and there you have ...