Amaan - Far Out

AMAAN · Post by **AMAAN** » Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:59 am

Hey! After a long time I managed to find my way back to the 'studio' :p Anyway tell me your what you think of Far Out, the second song in my myspace player..

www.myspace.com/amaanamanitas

greets,frank

boudo · Post by **boudo** » Mon Mar 23, 2009 11:33 am

Maybe not a minimal track but it's a nice track anyway. It's sounds like a Stephan Bodzin/Marc Romboy collaboration, it has a nice melody and i like the detuned synth/pad. Listening in shitty headphones, could give some more feedback later

AMAAN · Post by **AMAAN** » Mon Mar 23, 2009 12:54 pm

thnx for having a listen,looking forward to some more feedback and gracie for the comparison:D

HughJazz · Post by **HughJazz** » Tue Mar 24, 2009 8:13 pm

I liked the track - especially the tight rhythm track! Maybe you could have a bigger breakdown somewhere in the middle, spice up the arrangement somewhat - as it is the song (although good) goes on and on and kills my interest for it. Arranging the track is HARD!

AMAAN · Post by **AMAAN** » Wed Mar 25, 2009 8:21 am

yup that's true, it's pretty difficult :p I'll keep you posted on the progress

thnx for the reply btw!

grts

ferd · Post by **ferd** » Thu Mar 26, 2009 5:30 pm

i think it sounds good too...but there is not much happening during the track...there's no real climax...then again that might be the hardest part to make....

Phurniture · Post by **Phurniture** » Fri Mar 27, 2009 3:05 am

Good sounds and nice vibe overall, but I think the other posters hit the nail on the head - there needs to be more of a build towards a climax. Your sounds are begging for it! This could be a true peak-hour floor burner had there been a massive build and drop. Hard to do sometimes, and certainly not something I really try to do with my own tracks, but I think in this case it might be worth investigating. Cheers!

AMAAN · Post by **AMAAN** » Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:46 pm

thnx for listening! yup indeed, I'm going to try bringing a climax into it, hope it works

anyway I was thinking about putting a vocal in it,just for an instant.Normally I'm not that pro using vocals but maybe in this case it could also contribute adding some depth to the song.. what do you guys think?

Greets