mathias lexicon - thank you again

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mathias lexicon - thank you again

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http://www.blackboxmusic.net/thankyouagain.mp3


heres a song i just made....the main idea was for me to just work with melodies...i wasnt tryin to do anything with percussion too much...
i think i avoid melodies....so here i tried my best not to.....

so maybe an excercise, but its good enough to listen to
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it seems like theres no build before the kick drops, it just goes along, and then it drops, maybe try to work in some build there. the synth at 1:30 sounds off to me, i like the lfo vibrato effect, but no the sound.

3:05 now that synth sound smuch better, and the track from here sounds great. nice transition back at 4 mins too.

it took a while to warm to the groove, but once it got there i really liked this track.
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yeah i know what u mean about that synth being off....i tihnk when i made it...i hesitated

thanx for lsiteniin
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Post by Semirk »

This is one of the best i've heard from you mate, nice one.

The intro is great in my opinion and the melodies are really good. The track has a very nice flow to it alos. Theres one complaint though I have and thats the kick I'm afraid, it may just be my speakers but its too heavy in my opinion, especially when more isolated. Everything apart from that is cool though, good stuff.
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Post by plaster »

trippy stuff...but i told you that before :)



you are good with melodies, so stick to making them a little!
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