Semirk - Going Onwards

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 4:04 pm

Hey again,

Another sample this time and need you guys help on how this one is sounding so far so it can help me with the rest of the track.

http://www.sitesled.com/members/semirk/ ... nwards.mp3 right click and save as

Thanks

BobStock · Post by **BobStock** » Sun Jan 22, 2006 6:03 pm

Sorry man, I doesn't sound good to me.....It is a bit messy! But I think it is a ok setup...only you have to synch more with the sounds.... and I also hear a reeverb???? That got too much....Can't really give good feedback, (not english:P) This is not my thing....Think that mathias will say the same...hope he can give you some better feedback....

Keep it up! Maybe take some more time when you have made a track??? (incubation time) and change some things....! I heared some better things from you!!

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Tue Jan 24, 2006 8:00 am

i think id prefer this song without that first melody

having that first melody in there all the time...i was just about to say it doesnt change. but it just did... which is a good thing for sure...and it shows your developing into a better song writer

but yeah in a big way way id prefer this song without that big bassy melody
maybe smaller notes...or less...or none

and maybe adding a smaller less
constant melody thoughout the song would help it out more

some of the stuff you did with the percussion is great, so keep that up

later

BobStock · Post by **BobStock** » Tue Jan 24, 2006 10:54 am

mlexicon wrote:i think id prefer this song without that first melody

having that first melody in there all the time...i was just about to say it doesnt change. but it just did... which is a good thing for sure...and it shows your developing into a better song writer

but yeah in a big way way id prefer this song without that big bassy melody
maybe smaller notes...or less...or none and maybe adding a smaller less
constant melody thoughout the song would help it out more

some of the stuff you did with the percussion is great, so keep that up

In my ears it sound a bit out of synch???? Our is that the bass?? that makes it a bit messy?

later

kujoma · Post by **kujoma** » Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:16 am

The Beat goes nice. Made with? If selfsynthesized modulate some things a bit in time and get this anoying (sorry) lead sound out of it

It's properply a question of taste but - for sure - mine its defenetly not. Don't harmonize I think. Hope this helped. Keep it on!