working on my first track: opinions?

[vviizzoonn]

i recorded this raw mini 10 minute long session last night ..

opinions? i know the kick needs to be louder, but im just curious what you all think..

http://www.loudhead.net/sample.mp3

i need to take this clip and sequence it out a bit better ,

alex

[dubgil2]

i recorded this raw mini 10 minute long session last night ..

opinions? i know the kick needs to be louder, but im just curious what you all think..

http://www.loudhead.net/sample.mp3

i need to take this clip and sequence it out a bit better ,

alex

goog elements, I like the use of the 909 open hi hats, the revolving pad is kewl, not sure about the ending drone thing, but the overall elements are nice...tidy it up some (shorten it)

not much of a critique, sorry...

[vviizzoonn]

yeah the ending should just be disregarded,,, was really just experimenting by that point ..
moreso just the first 5 minutes or so maybe first 4 minutes

thanks

[boudo]

I really like those pad chords. They work nice together. Good atmosphere overall. But it lacks a good kick and bass to make it more danceable

[aciduss]

I loved it bro, really liked the vibe and don't have any complains about technique... yes ending is experimental and long but i did like it too

Keep on the good work. Congrats.


Made me relax at work ñ_ñ

[vviizzoonn]

yeah i always have problems on the bottom end of things, probably like anyone else..

looking to get an mbase 11 as im tired of trying to sculpt from kick samples

thanks for the positive feedback

[Robot Criminal]

wrong forum dude.
moved