EyesN - Aspect Of Death Is Loneliness

EyesN · Post by **EyesN** » Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:34 pm

hi. I have recently started my soundcloud profile, but I am not good at hyping myself, thus I will show you this track. I hope you enjoy.

http://soundcloud.com/eyesn/aspect-of-d ... loneliness

please listen, comment, enjoy

Christ Lewis · Post by **Christ Lewis** » Mon Jul 19, 2010 11:56 pm

Bit bland, a bit uneventful. It's very minimalistic, but I kinda miss something that makes up for it. Some orginality.

The break, again, kinda bland, as if someone slams the crossfader to a completely different track. The melodic structures are ok in and of themselves I suppose, but it's a shame that there is no intertwinement with the biggest part of the track.

EyesN · Post by **EyesN** » Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:14 pm

oh, thank you for the feedback

yea, I admit the difference between the parts separated by the break (and a break itself). I try to fix it for my next track.