http://www.blackboxmusic.net/nomorewalking.mp3
i think this might be my best song i ever made...for me personally
mathias lexicon - no more walking
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i like the beat and all that perc stuff, very-very nice. Totally like this mood. Maybe this mid tom u have there all the time, should silence it just a tad, its too loud and coming out compared to bd and overall.
The quiet pad u have in the back, I love it, maybe give it a more go.
and I must agree with the best track part for now. This one gives me warm feelings.
The quiet pad u have in the back, I love it, maybe give it a more go.
and I must agree with the best track part for now. This one gives me warm feelings.
we are all atomic and subatomic particles and we are all wireless...
yeah the tom /conga in the middle of the kicks shouldn't be as loud as the kicks, the melody will run better if the kicks are the more dominant.
im not feeling the nord style bass stab, nice drop away at 1:30 odd, that was smooth, nice work on shuffling the hats too, they sound great. ouch, whats that detune bass at 2:38? it too wide and fills the stereo field too much i think. maybe try running it in as mono, i think it will fit better like that. im wanting that nice pad from the beginning to come back in, that was a great sound.
at 5:09 everything sounds great, i dunno this is a strange track, as it goes on the sounds grow and find their place, so when it strips back down in the outro, it sounds excellent.
im not feeling the nord style bass stab, nice drop away at 1:30 odd, that was smooth, nice work on shuffling the hats too, they sound great. ouch, whats that detune bass at 2:38? it too wide and fills the stereo field too much i think. maybe try running it in as mono, i think it will fit better like that. im wanting that nice pad from the beginning to come back in, that was a great sound.
at 5:09 everything sounds great, i dunno this is a strange track, as it goes on the sounds grow and find their place, so when it strips back down in the outro, it sounds excellent.
Hey man,
First thing that I notice like others is the tom, the speakers i'm listening to it on aren't too big a fan of it. As Kenada has said with the kicks dominant more it would sound better, no need to remove it just lower it down a bit.
I'm a fan of the bass in this one, thats what drives the track along for me in this one. The percussion is excellent also.
Probably nothing new there in the review but hey.
Nice track though mate, definately making some good stuff.
First thing that I notice like others is the tom, the speakers i'm listening to it on aren't too big a fan of it. As Kenada has said with the kicks dominant more it would sound better, no need to remove it just lower it down a bit.
I'm a fan of the bass in this one, thats what drives the track along for me in this one. The percussion is excellent also.
Probably nothing new there in the review but hey.
Nice track though mate, definately making some good stuff.