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sohrab · Post by **sohrab** » Tue Jan 03, 2006 12:57 am

thats my first track Im posting here,not sure about the style!
Im really looking for your sugesstions

thanks
http://www.theupload.com/linkingcodes.php?id=00009278

forky forkerson · Post by **forky forkerson** » Tue Jan 03, 2006 1:41 am

sounds really good, it grooves, bounces, and has a chic vibe.
I honestly dont hear any really major flaws I think you did a good job and the song will probably be in my playlist.

as for a suggestion, im not the best person to be giving them but ill just say what id say to anything.... make it weirder.

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Tue Jan 03, 2006 2:58 am

listening:

sounds good
things seem well balanced....with this it comes down to personal preferance and stuff like that

nice sounding overall

keep it up senore

sohrab · Post by **sohrab** » Tue Jan 03, 2006 8:41 am

thank you very much for listening to it and many thanks for your opinions mates!
can you also tell some negative points ?!
anything you would did with this.

mlexicon · Post by **mlexicon** » Tue Jan 03, 2006 11:43 am

ok the only thing i can say i didnt like is that all your melody sits way too on top of the percussion and all that stuff..

i liked what u did for the percussion, and it kinda gets lost in the back

i think thats a tendancy for all of us....to think melodies have to be up front for you to get youe message across....when in all actuality....they can be almost ghosts in the back of the percussion

also...your melodies seem a lil too melodic for my tastes....and again i also think this is a tendancy for younger producers to do....

to make a melodic, trancey, you know what i mean...
well its easy to sit there and layer these pretty melodies all day

but in reality...you're kicking your own ass trying to figure out how to make those small unique...quirky ones that fit so well with all the other elements

does that make sense?

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Fri Jan 06, 2006 6:44 pm

Downloading mate, will review later for you.

Semirk · Post by **Semirk** » Fri Jan 06, 2006 11:38 pm

This is some nice stuff, the bass and melody are very good. I have to agree on the percussion point though, is a bit lost in the whole mixdown.

The meldoy nice as it is though definately takes a bit too much control of the track, sort of drowning out the kick. It may be perfect how you want it to sound already but I think it could be more hypnotising maybe on the sameish level as the bass.

Not a bad thing in my opinion but sounds a bit progressive, not sure if that was your aim. Your sounds are clear and crisp though so props to you on that.

A nice sounding piece though, definately fancy checking out some more of your stuff.

sohrab · Post by **sohrab** » Sat Jan 07, 2006 11:31 am

thanks for listening and your opinions semirk

Semirk wrote:sounds a bit progressive, not sure if that was your aim.

you're right it sounds a bit prog,but I really dont wanted it