first try to a finished song

[zxcv]

hey
after making loops and closing the program without saving eqing arrangement and mastering
i push myself to finally finish a few songs this year
and here is my first try
http://www.zshare.net/audio/716324471299daeb/

let me know what you think about it and give me some tips so i will learn how to do it better next time
i will give feedback in return so write down your myspace soundcloud or topic in this thread

thanks

[zxcv]

its a little bit lame to bump a thread in this section
but its my first tune
so i got a long learning way to a good tune

[Maiyal]

I really would help you, and listen to your track, but for some reason my computer doesn't let me listen to anything from zShare. Have you uploaded it anywhere else?

[ewinz]

create a soundcloud dude

[zxcv]

i will make a soundcloud account
when my next track will be finished