My prodcution journey ..feedback would be smashing:)

arthurbarr · Post by **arthurbarr** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:57 pm

ok ive been using ableton for the past 3/4 year taeching myself and pciking up tips from freinds

would love some feedback and tips on the below 2 tracks

arth

http://soundcloud.com/arthurbarr/arthurbarr-t0001

http://soundcloud.com/arthurbarr/robert ... -down-edit

Sionio · Post by **Sionio** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:18 pm

Very nice sounds and construction indeed, but i really miss kick poping out, its quite hard to recognize kickdrums in here becaus efects and etc. mix up, maybe try sidechaining your main drum line?

arthurbarr · Post by **arthurbarr** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:28 pm

hey dude which track you reffering to?

Sionio · Post by **Sionio** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:48 pm

Arthurbarr- t0001 <- This one

arthurbarr · Post by **arthurbarr** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 7:01 pm

Thaks dude il work on it!

ewinz · Post by **ewinz** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 8:29 pm

t0001 is really nice but a lil bit boring at 3.20, I dont really like the synth, percussions are really great, nice work, try to make your kick more louder, not so much.

arthurbarr · Post by **arthurbarr** » Fri Jan 15, 2010 3:58 pm

ewinz wrote:t0001 is really nice but a lil bit boring at 3.20, I dont really like the synth, percussions are really great, nice work, try to make your kick more louder, not so much.

yeh the synth sounds under produced just need to work on it ! will do dude !

XIII NRV · Post by **XIII NRV** » Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:44 pm

Hey ! Pretty nice and trippy, I really like how the spatialisation is done !
Snare in middle, hh left and weird voices left...Inspiring !