Not sure what i was going for here. but i think this track got nice rhythm in it and some nice sounds. but still not quite sure about it.
i wont tell you what im not sure about, that ill leave you to tell me
http://www.fileflyer.com/view/UHQtJC2
it still low on volume and got alot of work on the mix and adding some fx, but hope for some comment on the general idea of the track.
Illectronic Mind - Asylum [rearranged]
Illectronic Mind - Asylum [rearranged]
Last edited by Stomper on Sun Jun 22, 2008 1:59 pm, edited 2 times in total.
asylum
Havey reverb or summat on the lead line in the second half - sonething that makes it sound sinsister like and asylum
other than that i like it
other than that i like it
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dind't listen to the first attempt, but here's my opinion
like the beginning, nice sounding kick, bass, snare, hi hats...
like the percussion and the efx on them, except maybe that triangle thing, get's a little on my nerves
the melody isn't bad, but maybe try to fck it up a bit somethimes, for some more variation...
very nice percussion and variation comming in at 3.15 min!!
good track imo, love to here the finished version
like the beginning, nice sounding kick, bass, snare, hi hats...
like the percussion and the efx on them, except maybe that triangle thing, get's a little on my nerves
the melody isn't bad, but maybe try to fck it up a bit somethimes, for some more variation...
very nice percussion and variation comming in at 3.15 min!!
good track imo, love to here the finished version
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