NEED HELP!!!

alexx.wolfe · Post by **alexx.wolfe** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 1:29 pm

here is the track :

alexx wolfe - who what when where.mp3 - 4.14MB

At 3 mins, after the climax, comes the break, and there I have to introduce an new element to kill monotony but everything that I've added so far, seems to still attention from the main synth.

Give me opinions, and by the way tell me what you think about what is done already.

Thank you for your time and attention!

Opuswerk · Post by **Opuswerk** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 3:40 pm

loving the vibe. rocking!! kinda of uk houzsych. reminds me of switch.

Although the main synth you have going upwards isn't in tune. wich makes it sound very weird. some notes are of, you should fix that... I really love the bass thing. a lot more than the upwards synth actually. i'd work on melody in the highs, instead of with a synth. ie you have some kind of bubbly sound. play with that and get crazy in the melody with it!

Listen to Makin Money by Switch to see what i mean.

Thinking about it, i'd simply stick with the bassline you got and play around it. try splitting it in 3 bands, low, mid, higs, and play with the different layers. you could do something amazing with it.
I'd love to do a remix

alexx.wolfe · Post by **alexx.wolfe** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 6:40 pm

Thank you very much (:

No more opinions?

( as soon as I end it we talk about the remix

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MarkA · Post by **MarkA** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 7:15 pm

it's absolutely fine the way it is in terms of synth, reverting back to the original bassline was what I was going to suggest and you did that.
only thing I would say is a faster hi hat line, just to really kick it off
would also love to remix this

alexx.wolfe · Post by **alexx.wolfe** » Mon Dec 24, 2007 7:28 pm

Thank you very much..About the remix..we talk about it when the original is finished : D

alexx.wolfe · Post by **alexx.wolfe** » Tue Dec 25, 2007 3:47 pm

No more help? : S

alexx.wolfe · Post by **alexx.wolfe** » Wed Dec 26, 2007 9:45 pm

bah : (

alexx.wolfe · Post by **alexx.wolfe** » Wed Dec 26, 2007 11:23 pm

ok will forget this sound..will end it and send to mnml netlabel.

the ones that want to remix it just put their names here.