plaster - kwisatz haderach

[Robot Criminal]

somebody been reading Dune. And that can't be a bad thing.

damn this's one sleek track. maybe could use just a tad more variation but no new instruments or anything, could easily spoil the thing.

me like.

[Audio Dependent]

This is wicked mate! I don't think you need to add a hook or anything extra. I'm loving the bleeps and bass! Very good track indeed

[plaster]

somebody been reading Dune. And that can't be a bad thing.

damn this's one sleek track. maybe could use just a tad more variation but no new instruments or anything, could easily spoil the thing.

me like.

guilty!



um, i actually transposed some main elements last night...it sounds more "serious" but i still need to experiment a bit to see how it will sound... yeah, i thought about making subtly changes, but i'm so lazy and wanting to finish a track asap. lol


..i'll post the new voice of the track soon.

[strial]

I know most of times I start new tracks and finish tem one year later.

I've tons of track unachieved on my computer I see that other artists work like that, always want to finish the track and don't want to pass a lot of time making the automations....

I'm in this case also

[plaster]

there is a name for that... lazyness.


hehehe.



anyway, i transposed most parts of the track and added some new sounds, nothing too much. sounds way cooler now. will post the finished version when it's done.

[bazz001]

Sounds great dude, minimal quirkiness

would deff play this!

[strial]

Ahhhaaa that's right !

Also you have tons of idears that come in your brain you want to concretize all these idears but at the final most of time the day is off and there is nothing achieved ...

Minimal music in the minimal of time. lol

[pheek]

kwisatz haderach


pheek mentioned it lacks "the hook"... what do you guys/girls think?

I'm not the truth but if you ask me for feedback, you don't need to come on the forum to make sure I was right or wrong. When someone gives you feedback you can either work on it or ignore it. As for you hook, I believe you can play the subtle card of minimal percussion which can always work the way through. But if you a strong hook, it might make a track that will be ageless.

Why not just f*ck around with your hook to make it evolve a bit? You can also play with dynamics (pan, velocity, envelope, ofset, etc). That could be a nice add.

Your track is not weak or bad as I told you, it just could be "more."