OliX - mnml3

OliX · Post by **OliX** » Tue Oct 17, 2006 5:04 pm

not yet finished

http://media.putfile.com/mnml3

OliX · Post by **OliX** » Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:24 pm

not a single word :S
fck this

Zinthek · Post by **Zinthek** » Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:28 pm

Patience, my dear, patience.
It's not the most visited part of the forum.
I like the track but the arrangement is still pretty basic. It's also lacking that bit of funk that gets you moving.

OliX · Post by **OliX** » Thu Oct 19, 2006 12:22 am

yeah... I admit I suck at composition... actualy just first 90 seconds is what I like... other is mostly forced and it will be changed some day... and what kind of funk that gets you moving? I don't understand that part

is it something catchy that makes you listen the song or is it something that makes it dancable? feel free to explain what it is....

btw thanx for commenting

Zinthek · Post by **Zinthek** » Thu Oct 19, 2006 5:50 pm

Well it's hard to explain, that's why I give it a hazy name like 'funk' or 'vibe' or 'schwung'

It can be soms groovy bassline or a catchy melody, something that really catches your eye (ear).

OliX · Post by **OliX** » Thu Oct 19, 2006 6:05 pm

now I understand

I found that bass sound after a break catchy

damn I jus wish I got patiente and time to work more on it

RAK · Post by **RAK** » Thu Oct 19, 2006 8:23 pm

you should take the time and work it out, i like the beginning very much,
some freaking going on with the bass sound
make a better break is my advice and after that a better structure the beginning is good but it feels like you only took the time for the beginning
and not to finished it

cool that you get mad when you didnt get a reaction

cheers rs