well, i'm not to keen on the snare sample you used...it just doesn't really fit in the concept. maybe you could think of making a few extra layers to make it more unique and interresting. same thing goes for the hats.
i kind of don't feel what are you aiming with this piece...maybe because it's just a sample.
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Quite like it - the programming is pretty tight, I think you just need to have a think about some of the sounds (as has been suggested already). The snare esp.
Like the vocal bit etc.