ditch the panning on the hats, especially when it cuts from left to right channel altogether, that just leaves a massive hole where the hats used to be = not good.
ok it's 2:34, the beginner piano has dropped out, and the bassline is going along, and im waiting for this to do something, anything. as it has promise right here, right now. and the hats you dropped aren't enough. and now the beginner piano is back. this is stuck in a permanent state of about to go somewhere. the unfortunate thing is that it never does.
I have one sound for you, Kick Drum!!!
it it would have dropped at 2:30 odd after the big bassline, it would have killed, minimal is one thing, and beatless techno is another, but this is inbetween the two, and not finished for my tastes.