Spurn - Come Get My Bugs ~ NEW TRACK!!!

[JayRP]

finished a few nights ago.
feedback is always appreciated and reciprocated!!!

http://soundcloud.com/spurn/come-get-my-bugs

enjoy!

[Stomper]

thats a very nice track!
i think that at 1:05 theres too much coming in at once, but other than that its sounds very good.
i like the vocals (is that you?) and how you played with them at the start.

[JayRP]

thanks a lot for the response Stomper!
i was beginning to think no one was going to really bother listening.
its hard to get hits from this forum, you know?

ive only been producing about 2 years now and i think im most proud of this one.
been looking for more producers and audiophiles to give a listen and give me some real feedback
so again, thanks!

ive gotten some other feedback along the same lines as yours, i.e. too much going on in certain places.
im not sure if mastering would be able to fix this, or maybe just striping a little bit back.
i'll prob take a look at it again in a few months and clean it up a bit.

as for the vocals, oh god no thats not me!! lolol.
i only say that cause i cant sing to save my life.

the vocals, and a few other elements like the hats & the clap
are all sampled from this old record my mother gave me awhile back.

[Stomper]

well, you did a good job sampling it.

mastering will definitely wont help. not to what i mean at least. what i meant was that at 1:05 you have too many elements showing up at once. i would bring one up slowly with a lp filter and than add another. makes a smoother intro imo.

[JayRP]

oh ok, i see what you mean.
i thought you meant there were too many elements fighting for the same freqs.