http://www.blackboxmusic.net/seeyousmiling.mp3
i wa so proud of this track, but nobody ever really dug it
how bout u?
post the track you like, but nobody else does...
dang!
i really dig this stuff, but a bassline could do some really good shizz...
i really dig this stuff, but a bassline could do some really good shizz...
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Drop the idea of becoming someone else, because you are already a masterpiece.
i prefer the title funkishit.
I think the percussion needs beefing up, like the hats and such seem thin. Maybe a small room reverb would help that.
I think there needs to be some more variation in the main melody, it's just looping, and while it's good, needs to be changed up.
I like the pad, but think it would sound better with some more depth to it, as there really isn't a bassline in there.
From the 4 min mark on - it's starting to drag on for my taste, this could do with being condensed, or adding a new section to change it up...
I think the percussion needs beefing up, like the hats and such seem thin. Maybe a small room reverb would help that.
I think there needs to be some more variation in the main melody, it's just looping, and while it's good, needs to be changed up.
I like the pad, but think it would sound better with some more depth to it, as there really isn't a bassline in there.
From the 4 min mark on - it's starting to drag on for my taste, this could do with being condensed, or adding a new section to change it up...
yeah...i made that song probably a year ago....i avoided basslines at all cost, and yes i really didnt know how to build or break a track down, so this is a lil loopy, but im still proud of it. I thnk i was in a way more experimental and less controlled than i am now. Id like to find a middle ground.
Arent there songs you like of yourself, but nobody else really understood?
Im curious to hear others.
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Arent there songs you like of yourself, but nobody else really understood?
Im curious to hear others.
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_smile.gif)
hahaha! its so true...i love this track but everyone i sent it too had
opposite feelings.
http://www.boomklik.com/red/final/RED17.mp3
opposite feelings.
http://www.boomklik.com/red/final/RED17.mp3
thanks...i seem to enjoy subtle work way more than others.mlexicon wrote:damn jp
i like the track senor...
it does seem a lil long, but there seems to be alot of lil experimentation going on, which is appreciated
oh well...maybe this one will be released as a "classic" 10 years into
my techno career. ...hahaha!