http://www.blackboxmusic.net/seeyousmiling.mp3
i wa so proud of this track, but nobody ever really dug it
how bout u?
post the track you like, but nobody else does...
dang!
i really dig this stuff, but a bassline could do some really good shizz...
i really dig this stuff, but a bassline could do some really good shizz...
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Drop the idea of becoming someone else, because you are already a masterpiece.
i prefer the title funkishit.
I think the percussion needs beefing up, like the hats and such seem thin. Maybe a small room reverb would help that.
I think there needs to be some more variation in the main melody, it's just looping, and while it's good, needs to be changed up.
I like the pad, but think it would sound better with some more depth to it, as there really isn't a bassline in there.
From the 4 min mark on - it's starting to drag on for my taste, this could do with being condensed, or adding a new section to change it up...
I think the percussion needs beefing up, like the hats and such seem thin. Maybe a small room reverb would help that.
I think there needs to be some more variation in the main melody, it's just looping, and while it's good, needs to be changed up.
I like the pad, but think it would sound better with some more depth to it, as there really isn't a bassline in there.
From the 4 min mark on - it's starting to drag on for my taste, this could do with being condensed, or adding a new section to change it up...
yeah...i made that song probably a year ago....i avoided basslines at all cost, and yes i really didnt know how to build or break a track down, so this is a lil loopy, but im still proud of it. I thnk i was in a way more experimental and less controlled than i am now. Id like to find a middle ground.
Arent there songs you like of yourself, but nobody else really understood?
Im curious to hear others.
Arent there songs you like of yourself, but nobody else really understood?
Im curious to hear others.
hahaha! its so true...i love this track but everyone i sent it too had
opposite feelings.
http://www.boomklik.com/red/final/RED17.mp3
opposite feelings.
http://www.boomklik.com/red/final/RED17.mp3
thanks...i seem to enjoy subtle work way more than others.mlexicon wrote:damn jp
i like the track senor...
it does seem a lil long, but there seems to be alot of lil experimentation going on, which is appreciated
oh well...maybe this one will be released as a "classic" 10 years into
my techno career. ...hahaha!