Maiyal- Breathing Fingers (Dub, deep house)

Maiyal · Post by **Maiyal** » Sat Feb 05, 2011 7:58 pm

Hey everybody, check out my new track.

http://soundcloud.com/maiyal/breathing-fingers

Let me know what you think.

Maiyal · Post by **Maiyal** » Sun Feb 06, 2011 10:59 pm

Nobody?

kristofason · Post by **kristofason** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 7:15 pm

ye nice concept! Intro with no percussion till 1 minute is too long in my opinion, I know its probably the style ur going for but it needs at least a hat..not into the snare sound too much, I think its too loud and the reverb depth doesnt suit the rest of the track imo, I (personally) would have it sat back a bit more in the mix..and give the bass a bit more umph!!
Just my opinion tho! Still a good track with potential !

nakoradiomies · Post by **nakoradiomies** » Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:49 pm

your drums for this track are way too straight forward 4/4

but chords and those bleeps n stuff were nice

Maiyal · Post by **Maiyal** » Tue Feb 15, 2011 6:15 am

Thanks for the comments!

Yeah, that was the style I was going for, starting off more atmospheric and then having the drums come in after 1 minute.

The drums are lacking in the groove compartment, that I agree with. Should have paid more attention to it. Next track I make I'll keep these things in mind, cheers.