my newest track, Parasitic Organism, dark percussive techno hefty style
some feedback would be great, thanks in advance
http://soundcloud.com/hefty/parasitic-organism
Parasitic Organism - Dark Driving Techno
- david.lake
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yah, listening now. in my living room, so not studio sound here.
i was gonna click stop when those first light percussions came in.
now the resonant chamber sortof hits, like sonars just got me listening. hehe
synths kicked in
and im hoping for them to go detuned as fck in some break. just one big false note with noise. like a siren iiiiaaa iiiaaaiiiaa... i can hear it already.
and it keeps me listening.
and yay, there it was. but darker than i expected.
Nice.
there is however some sorta click sound, not sure if it's supposed to be there or not. sounds off here in my crappy livingroom setup. after the big break.
kindah lost interest when those howling wolf soundy things and some sounds were like, boat harbour. Not sure, my associations kicked off weirdly.
5:50 and im right back innit. Nice again
and the lightly hit percussions again. i like that sorta stuff.
and it works to the end i think. cymbals couldve gone on for a bit longer i think, drummer wasnt even tired yet.
i could rate it. yeah. ill rate it 3/5 hehe
checkin your other stuff now. I think you can do better )
i was gonna click stop when those first light percussions came in.
now the resonant chamber sortof hits, like sonars just got me listening. hehe
synths kicked in
and im hoping for them to go detuned as fck in some break. just one big false note with noise. like a siren iiiiaaa iiiaaaiiiaa... i can hear it already.
and it keeps me listening.
and yay, there it was. but darker than i expected.
Nice.
there is however some sorta click sound, not sure if it's supposed to be there or not. sounds off here in my crappy livingroom setup. after the big break.
kindah lost interest when those howling wolf soundy things and some sounds were like, boat harbour. Not sure, my associations kicked off weirdly.
5:50 and im right back innit. Nice again
and the lightly hit percussions again. i like that sorta stuff.
and it works to the end i think. cymbals couldve gone on for a bit longer i think, drummer wasnt even tired yet.
i could rate it. yeah. ill rate it 3/5 hehe
checkin your other stuff now. I think you can do better )
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wow wot fantastic feedback, thanks a lot, its most def appreciated!!! i like how u think and i like how you explain your journey!!david.lake wrote:yah, listening now. in my living room, so not studio sound here.
i was gonna click stop when those first light percussions came in.
now the resonant chamber sortof hits, like sonars just got me listening. hehe
synths kicked in
and im hoping for them to go detuned as fck in some break. just one big false note with noise. like a siren iiiiaaa iiiaaaiiiaa... i can hear it already.
and it keeps me listening.
and yay, there it was. but darker than i expected.
Nice.
there is however some sorta click sound, not sure if it's supposed to be there or not. sounds off here in my crappy livingroom setup. after the big break.
kindah lost interest when those howling wolf soundy things and some sounds were like, boat harbour. Not sure, my associations kicked off weirdly.
5:50 and im right back innit. Nice again
and the lightly hit percussions again. i like that sorta stuff.
and it works to the end i think. cymbals couldve gone on for a bit longer i think, drummer wasnt even tired yet.
i could rate it. yeah. ill rate it 3/5 hehe
checkin your other stuff now. I think you can do better )
many thanks mate, im sure i will do better in the future, this was my 1st attempt at a techno track i will learn more n more
dude i def appreciate your views, you seem to know your stuff!!XIII NRV wrote:Like, sounds very, nice ! On my speakers though, the fx are a bit to loud and taking the whole spectrum...as well as the 2note lead...I'd lower it a bit.
Nice construction . Always your style.
cheers for the feedback, its been kicking around on my cpu for a while now, i think ive exhausted myself with it, but like i said its my 1st attempt at techno so im pretty pleased, and the fact that peeps r liking it means a lot, thanks!!!!!!
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