Hi guys, thanks for taking the time to help me out!
So, I'm really into dark tracks with lots of ambiance and deep grooving basses. My best tries so far are these three tracks. Still, I think it's missing something.. What do you think? Are there some problems in the mix? Does it need more elements (percussion? sub?)
http://soundcloud.com/camel/48-hz
http://soundcloud.com/camel/tremor
http://soundcloud.com/camel/bayon
Camel - 48 Hz / Tremor / Bayon (Dark Stuff)
Camel - 48 Hz / Tremor / Bayon (Dark Stuff)
Last edited by Camel on Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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48hz definitely needs more elements / stuff going on. The wobbly bass quickly gets annoying, definitely needs more attention.
I think you nailed the dark minimal genre with bayon. Avoid the reverbed monolake-ish synth stabs, keep the bass low, and you've got it. Just like you did in bayon. I'd play it.
I think you nailed the dark minimal genre with bayon. Avoid the reverbed monolake-ish synth stabs, keep the bass low, and you've got it. Just like you did in bayon. I'd play it.
Thanks for the feedback Lewis. I'll try and improve 48 Hz. Maybe pull out the bass once or twice so it's less constant/annoying.
Anyone else has any suggestions on improving my tracks (mix- and musicwise)? Much appreciated!
Anyone else has any suggestions on improving my tracks (mix- and musicwise)? Much appreciated!
Last edited by Camel on Fri Aug 13, 2010 5:43 pm, edited 2 times in total.