Crude - Nordic Delirium (Border Community style)

[Crude]

http://soundcloud.com/crude/nordic-delirium
http://soundcloud.com/crude/nordic-delirium


Hoi there, i've recently finished a track that has a special atmoshpere, reminding me of the border comm time, with psyché melodic synth and weird aerial pad..

If you have time, feedbacks are welcome !! Hope you will like it.

[Phurniture]

Nice textures. At points I find it too dry, such as the first passage after the beat comes in. Also, I like the metallic, building stuttering flanging effect, but I think at the beginning it would have been more effective to build towards that effect starting with the simple sound you have going on around the 30 second mark, making the effect more and more pronounced...and then drop the beat in. In terms of build-ups/break downs, the one you have at around 4:30 where the track fades out, it comes back in an awkward way for me.

Overall, the direction of the track is good, but I think working on perfecting the builds and progression would take it to the next level. Cheers.

[Crude]

Ok thans you for your interesting feedback i will def try this out