After Disco "option chain" ---slow techno/house

Rick McClatchie · Post by **Rick McClatchie** » Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:58 pm

made this slow house track....

http://soundcloud.com/afterdisco/options-chain

what you guys think?..should i approach a label?..and if so, which?

Roqqert · Post by **Roqqert** » Wed Jan 27, 2010 11:09 pm

could some more work.... in mix and storytelling. just try some deep-house labels....

Rick McClatchie · Post by **Rick McClatchie** » Wed Jan 27, 2010 11:17 pm

storytelling?..this aint pre school

Roqqert · Post by **Roqqert** » Thu Jan 28, 2010 12:33 pm

its a loop. it has no head or a tail. theres no start or an end. you get me lol

zxcv · Post by **zxcv** » Thu Jan 28, 2010 6:46 pm

you need some work on the arrangement
its a little bit flat

tone-def · Post by **tone-def** » Fri Jan 29, 2010 3:26 am

i really liked it.

i think it could do with some vocals. not singing, just someone talking about detroit or the old days or whatever...

nakoradiomies · Post by **nakoradiomies** » Fri Jan 29, 2010 10:15 am

i think it has it all..it grooves like hell and that´s the only story what good track needs imo

well okay some good hypnotic vocals top of it would be great addition but nothing else.. good job!

Rick McClatchie · Post by **Rick McClatchie** » Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:53 pm

im all for that detriot slang...thanks for checkin friends