maybe throw in some different kimds of reverb action on the drums(snare) a bit here and there and then cut them out again, so they move a lil less rigid like....
i think thats what i would do maybe, so thats all i can offer for now
I really like the bass running thru this track, drums seem abit dry, the overall arrangement is very nice and a good mellow vibe throughout, i think maybe you should reintroduce that good bass you started with (beginning of track) towards the end as well as I liked it better then what I would call the quirky bass you have introduced towards 5 min mark and on, over-all I like the track
i think it s a nice track , well arranged i cant tell anything soundwise cause i am listening it with shitty earplugs but good work .
and i have to agree with sneaky the bassline in the beginning is fat but the variation on the bass i like aswell