(Listening in crappy speakers)
There's some sound i think is to high-end. And i don't like the open hihat that comes in about 0.30.
The track is great though, there's a lot of nice sounds going on, but then the open hihat comes again. I don't really hear a kick but it could be my speakers messing. Overall good, keep working cause it's got potential
Good call on the kick, it was mixed a bit low and i've corrected that. My monitoring situation kind of sucks for bass, i'd be curious how the kick/bass sound on a proper system with a sub.
I'm a sucker for the 909, so even if it's a bit hokey that 909 ride at 30 secs and again throughout is gonna stay.
what were you talking about with the "too high end" sounds? the clicks in the initial beat?
You have a nice beat running on but I have to say I'm not crazy about the cymbal thing either.
Also I think you should compress you track a lot more, this kind of music has to be hard compressed and pumping (like Ben Sims or Cari Lekebusch's production for example).