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http://www.zshare.net/audio/570497532b2728b4/

This is a new track im working on it needs mastering, just want to get some feed back if poss.

Many thanks Pete :D
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Post by tone-def »

It's to tribal for my liking. I over did the tribal thing when i was a teenager.
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Thats not really feed back in my book...............
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It's a pretty good track overall, but it might work better if instead of such digital sounding kicks and hats you had used something that sounds a little more natural/less sequenced.

Otherwise it works pretty well.
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Post by pete22 »

Thanks for the feed back thats real good constructive critasisum.... :D
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pete22 wrote:Thanks for the feed back thats real good constructive critasisum.... :D
I think the correct spelling is "clitorism"
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sorry about that :oops:

the arrangement is good but you need to work on your drums.
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bender wrote:sorry about that :oops:

the arrangement is good but you need to work on your drums.

Spelling was never my best subject lol.....

Thanks for ur feedback. What in particular do u think i need to do to them, im new to producing so any tips would be great.... :D
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