Track iv done, just need some feedback and pointers really..

pete22 · Post by **pete22** » Tue Dec 30, 2008 1:29 pm

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5347002529cfae7c/

Robot Criminal · Post by **Robot Criminal** » Tue Dec 30, 2008 3:31 pm

next time post to the right forum plz, thanks.

pete22 · Post by **pete22** » Tue Dec 30, 2008 4:53 pm

Soz my bad i thought id put it in here.

victorgonzales · Post by **victorgonzales** » Thu Jan 01, 2009 9:36 am

I think the beginning part takes a tad bit too long. needs to build a bit faster. seems like it drones on a bit. Needs some kind of changing element in it too keep it flowing.

Myfirstcasio · Post by **Myfirstcasio** » Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:26 pm

god dammit, I love the vibe of this track but I keep listening to the sodding sample! Too much! I think you should just take some snippets of the vocal sample and get rid of the rest. use the snippets as more of a "garnish" (haha - I sound like a twat!) and stutter it a bit, pitch it maybe. At the moment the samples to focal and its drawn attention away from the track its self, which is a really cool track.

SHAP · Post by **SHAP** » Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:11 pm

...and the vocal are full of background noise...use auto filter or eq...

XIII NRV · Post by **XIII NRV** » Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:34 pm

Hey, there is something freaky about the track, and I enjoy it...but the vocal sample is filled up with bck round noizes...
The track is pretty interesting...I don't like te snare...way to loud, and there isn't a "lot" going on actually.
Bye !

pete22 · Post by **pete22** » Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:39 pm

Thanks for all ur feed bk i really do appreciate it very much, all is taken on board and il post up the track again when iv changed some stuff.