warren knowles - subminimal

warren888k · Post by **warren888k** » Thu Jul 10, 2008 2:55 pm

you can listen to it on my space below

http://www.myspace.com/bobbyuwing

not a new track i've done, but the last 'minimal' thing i tried

and as i'm new to the forum, any feedback from new ears would be good!

MarkA · Post by **MarkA** » Sun Jul 13, 2008 6:57 pm

your myspace page doesn't load

warren888k · Post by **warren888k** » Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:13 pm

i should really check the spelling of things that need to be spelt correctly like myspace pages before posting

MarkA · Post by **MarkA** » Sun Jul 13, 2008 7:43 pm

not bad man, very good basis you've got going on there.
it's lacking something, maybe a few synth stabs or a vocal could fill, but there's a decent groove there

warren888k · Post by **warren888k** » Sun Jul 13, 2008 9:00 pm

cheers mate

spur · Post by **spur** » Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:17 pm

it has a nice , some spooky, atmosphere. It could use some samples to emphasize that. reverb string synths or something alike.

but good balancing the volume of percussive background

warren888k · Post by **warren888k** » Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:20 pm

nice one for the feedback

ec50 · Post by **ec50** » Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:38 am

just like markA pointed out - good basis - needs something though--- 'melody' of some sort - dont go overboard though - sequence of 3/4 sounds would suffice - or indeed a vocal of some sort.

good stuff - downloading one of your dub mixes

catch you around