Illectronic Mind - Asylum [rearranged]

Stomper · Post by **Stomper** » Fri Jun 20, 2008 7:39 pm

Not sure what i was going for here. but i think this track got nice rhythm in it and some nice sounds. but still not quite sure about it.
i wont tell you what im not sure about, that ill leave you to tell me

http://www.fileflyer.com/view/UHQtJC2

it still low on volume and got alot of work on the mix and adding some fx, but hope for some comment on the general idea of the track.

5thinstar · Post by **5thinstar** » Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:50 pm

Havey reverb or summat on the lead line in the second half - sonething that makes it sound sinsister like and asylum

other than that i like it

Stomper · Post by **Stomper** » Sat Jun 21, 2008 5:14 pm

Hey,
thnx for the feedback.
it does have some heavy reverb and delay on top of that. listening again, there might be to much. thnx

Stomper · Post by **Stomper** » Sun Jun 22, 2008 2:02 pm

Well, i decided to take this more into the minimal side, so pads and the second lead are out.
more glitchs wierd percussions.

link updated, hope to hear some thoughts on this track.

Regards,
Stomper.

michielwijnen · Post by **michielwijnen** » Sun Jun 22, 2008 2:18 pm

dind't listen to the first attempt, but here's my opinion

like the beginning, nice sounding kick, bass, snare, hi hats...

like the percussion and the efx on them, except maybe that triangle thing, get's a little on my nerves

the melody isn't bad, but maybe try to fck it up a bit somethimes, for some more variation...

very nice percussion and variation comming in at 3.15 min!!

good track imo, love to here the finished version