Hello fellow mnmlers,
Here's a new track from us called Onpa. Was done this we after some very nice partying in sunny Berlin.
You can listen to it here: http://www.virb.com/opuswerk second track in the player.
Would love your opinion and thoughts about this one.
Opuswerk Onpa
Opuswerk Onpa
Opuswerk is now Hendrik van Boetzelaer
Links / Latest News : https://linktr.ee/opuswerk
www.soundcloud.com/opuswerk
www.instagram.com/opuswerk
Links / Latest News : https://linktr.ee/opuswerk
www.soundcloud.com/opuswerk
www.instagram.com/opuswerk
Hey hello opus !
Take a heard of your tracks on my computer headphones !
From what i hear there is lots of interesting sound , nice melodic construction, congrats !
To my taste, the pad which enter at 34s is too clear and i don't like the way that the hit hat enter in the track. Some more distortion on your synths may be an interesting thing to give power and life to your track !
By the way nice work man !
See you
Take a heard of your tracks on my computer headphones !
From what i hear there is lots of interesting sound , nice melodic construction, congrats !
To my taste, the pad which enter at 34s is too clear and i don't like the way that the hit hat enter in the track. Some more distortion on your synths may be an interesting thing to give power and life to your track !
By the way nice work man !
See you
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hi opuswerk, just came back from my exam (wich I fucked up a little) and the track calmed me down
the track sounds really good imo, the synth that comes in could use some more distortion yes, i had that feeling to
and i would bring the hi hat in together when the kick/beat comes back in, it does sound a little to sudden in the middle of that break.
so... acctually everything was allready said
good work!
(erver send a demo to border community, I really thing you fit their sound, maybe your lucky :p)
the track sounds really good imo, the synth that comes in could use some more distortion yes, i had that feeling to
and i would bring the hi hat in together when the kick/beat comes back in, it does sound a little to sudden in the middle of that break.
so... acctually everything was allready said
good work!
(erver send a demo to border community, I really thing you fit their sound, maybe your lucky :p)
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thanks for the comments!
i'll work on that hi hat and get the pad to be more interesting. About the synth, i'll try and add some distortion to it. make it darker, grittier.
One question thaough for those with a sub. How's the low end doing?
i can't really check it because of my neighbourghs....
i'll work on that hi hat and get the pad to be more interesting. About the synth, i'll try and add some distortion to it. make it darker, grittier.
One question thaough for those with a sub. How's the low end doing?
i can't really check it because of my neighbourghs....
Opuswerk is now Hendrik van Boetzelaer
Links / Latest News : https://linktr.ee/opuswerk
www.soundcloud.com/opuswerk
www.instagram.com/opuswerk
Links / Latest News : https://linktr.ee/opuswerk
www.soundcloud.com/opuswerk
www.instagram.com/opuswerk
nice track once again guys - very clean sounding - perhaps indeed sometimes 'rough it up' a bit:
feel that the low end could be turned up - bit hollow there (due to volume) - more bass will give the track more attitude i feel / more powerful
also the snare is a bit flat... probably by choice, maybe try a rougher one?
feel that the low end could be turned up - bit hollow there (due to volume) - more bass will give the track more attitude i feel / more powerful
also the snare is a bit flat... probably by choice, maybe try a rougher one?