Stevie P - Chimneys Down

StEVP · Post by **StEVP** » Thu May 29, 2008 1:06 pm

Hey All,

my latest track called 'Chimneys Down' is now up on my myspace player.

check it ---- www.myspace.com/steviepdj

cheers,
stevie.

ferd · Post by **ferd** » Fri May 30, 2008 5:37 pm

ye, it's decent

although some parts in the track are quite boring, i think it's a pretty good track

Opuswerk · Post by **Opuswerk** » Fri May 30, 2008 9:29 pm

didn't really enjoy this one....

not really my cup of tea. I like the idea behind the track, but as said, i find it a bit boring. It lacks excitation and small build ups. I don't like the main synth as well. the one doing the hook. Although i also see what you were trying to do with this, I'm not sure you succeeded.
But I guess it's just a matter of tastes. I do love the bassline, and could see myself jumping to this one. but maybe work on the synths?

Monotek · Post by **Monotek** » Mon Jun 02, 2008 4:22 am

hi,
nice 808 kick, the high freq. are fcked up in some parts probably because of myshit player. if u ask me ill work a little bit on snare sound(its boring and maybe a little bit too loud, but i am not sure) i ill add one more "background" melody too, maybe thats the key for this track! ull get one more dimension, and the "boring" parts will be gone!

this is just my opinion, no offense!

and i like the track and the main melody too

bye

ivan

StEVP · Post by **StEVP** » Mon Jun 02, 2008 12:45 pm

thanks for the feedback monotek!

I will change some things on the track, the background melody is a good idea, I'll see what I can do.

cheers

michielwijnen · Post by **michielwijnen** » Mon Jun 02, 2008 6:44 pm

i like this, don't know, i really like the sound of that synth... could variate some more I gues... but I'm also a more repetitive kind of guy so for me it's not necessary

good work

(love the bassline

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StEVP · Post by **StEVP** » Mon Jun 02, 2008 6:50 pm

thanks mike, appreciated

ec50 · Post by **ec50** » Tue Jun 03, 2008 12:37 am

i like this track stevie!
feeling it - good concept - like the beat+groove

bit 'empty' though for my liking...

ah - after the break at 3 mins, not feeling the synth when its opened up... the pattern is good etc, just dont like the sound the way it is now. feel like you could def do 'somehting'. make it less 'basic/standard'. add effects? or play with the settings?

curious to hear what the second draft will sound like