New track i'm working on. Would appriciate some feedback.
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thanx
Metaphor Festival - Red Motive
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yep. i'm in the beggining of mnml producition, so i'm starting out with premade sh!t (just like i started with house and ambient.. now i got few commercial releases..). just wanted to get some feedback so i know that i'm on the right track or not. TBH, i started out listening to mnml music few weeks ago, so i'm still learning.... a lot. ![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
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It sounds well-produced. I can see the ambient influences. BUT: Your song is too minimal! A good track need some melody, or some rhythm. This means more than just the percussion.
I'm giving you an example here. It's a minimalistic melody but it has a nice synth chord rhythm in the background:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RgPmjjmSpUc
This is, of course, my personal point of view. I'm not a professional or anything, just want to give some feedback. Right now it's not a track at all. But keep working and post it later. Good luck!
I'm giving you an example here. It's a minimalistic melody but it has a nice synth chord rhythm in the background:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RgPmjjmSpUc
This is, of course, my personal point of view. I'm not a professional or anything, just want to give some feedback. Right now it's not a track at all. But keep working and post it later. Good luck!