Metaphor Festival - Red Motive

Metaphor Festival · Post by **Metaphor Festival** » Tue May 06, 2008 4:02 pm

New track i'm working on. Would appriciate some feedback.

Download / listen here

thanx

Adrian Kiliszek · Post by **Adrian Kiliszek** » Tue May 06, 2008 4:23 pm

another track with a lot samples from sample pack:)thats just few seconds.its hard to say something.finishd your track and than come back.

Metaphor Festival · Post by **Metaphor Festival** » Tue May 06, 2008 6:07 pm

yep. i'm in the beggining of mnml producition, so i'm starting out with premade sh!t (just like i started with house and ambient.. now i got few commercial releases..). just wanted to get some feedback so i know that i'm on the right track or not. TBH, i started out listening to mnml music few weeks ago, so i'm still learning.... a lot.

boudo · Post by **boudo** » Wed May 07, 2008 3:17 am

It sounds well-produced. I can see the ambient influences. BUT: Your song is too minimal! A good track need some melody, or some rhythm. This means more than just the percussion.

I'm giving you an example here. It's a minimalistic melody but it has a nice synth chord rhythm in the background:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RgPmjjmSpUc

This is, of course, my personal point of view. I'm not a professional or anything, just want to give some feedback. Right now it's not a track at all. But keep working and post it later. Good luck!