Henrik Kaaimann - Interim

[Henrik Kaaimann]

Been working on this track, but it isn't finished yet so ....
Any idea's to make it better?

listen => http://users.telenet.be/Chirohern/edit3.mp3

Thx!

H.Kaaimann

[Crimson Chamber Music]

Well it is very clearly arranged, which is a plus but to me it is a bit slow in the build up, I am waiting for a peak, sort of, and in the last minute you kind of provide something in form of a little melody which is nice, but I was thinking more in line of some chords, which takes up the mids and high mids and not just the treble as the melody does, the lower frequencies are full I think, but I would also suggest to give the bassline more space ( I am talking about the bass synth line, its not that innovative but it has got a nice little melody to and if you were to alter the sound a little so that it takes up more space frequencywise I think that would improve the track a lot.)

hope that helps
greetins from Jena, Germany
Edwin