Go on giv a listen - the one 01

kristofason · Post by **kristofason** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 7:28 pm

Hello can anyone giv me a bit of constructive criticism on this track...

its the first song on myspaz
http://www.myspace.com/chrisyardleymusic

dunno if ive done the url thing right..
The main part of the track starts at 4:20 and the feel of the track changes so please if uve got time listen to the whole track (bit cheeky),u would be doing me a massive favour as ive only shown it to very few like minded people who seem to like it...
cheers,Chris

MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE · Post by **MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:03 pm

Just listening to the intro, this is some fucking crazy sh!t... i like it!

The kick sounds clean and deep, very nice , the percs fitting nicely, i like the clave sounds, and all the synths sound balanced ... spot on.

Heres the 4.20 mark...... new synth sounds jsut come in and everthing is building...... and i still like it, sounds very retro

Overall id say this tune is the sh!t man, maybe looses the flow toward the end, but thats my opinion and theres nothing actually wrong with it, from a dj point of view id use the first 3-4 minutes in a mix for shure.....

Id like a copy if you can sort it, nice work man

kristofason · Post by **kristofason** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:14 pm

cheers mate!Its not exactly minimal is it,do u reckon the last part dont fit with the first 4 mins?I have to say i love the melodies n stuff but i dunno if they fit with the first part..

MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE · Post by **MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:21 pm

I think there deffinatley two different, good ideas in one 01, they fit together, but id say in a club the first four minutes would be most effective

its like an album track if you know what i mean, with the end part, which sounds lush btw....

I wouldnt like to atempt to clasify anything into a genre, but it sounds fresh which is most important...

niche

kristofason · Post by **kristofason** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:28 pm

nice one dude honestly.good feedback.
I think i have a habit of makin my tunes osund like 2 different tunes together,coz i listen to it over and over again,flap it and think that it needs a drastic change.definitly what u said tho fck knows what genre it is..!

MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE · Post by **MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:36 pm

I see your from coventry, do you go to below

kristofason · Post by **kristofason** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:38 pm

I live in Madrid but i was there for new year,the warehouse party ting

MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE · Post by **MINIMALTECHNOHOUSE** » Sun Jan 13, 2008 9:45 pm

I didnt make it, but ill be at the next party for shure......