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Hmm, your track is far from perfect.

There's way too much reverb! I won't further discuss the sound quality because I don't have decent speakers right now.
The synth sound is a bit cheesy, but used efficiently could be OK...

The voice samples are cool! Maybe a bit too much "behind". Have you listened to "Propaganda" by Brian Aneurysm? ;)

The biggest problem is the rhythm. Boom, tshak, boom, tshak. The synth is always on the beat. Boooring!

But there's hope in the very end. An echo brings a slight variation. IMHO it's the way to go. Listen to "Freakside" by Shlomi Aber if you want to know what I mean... And suddenly I felt this track could become interesting!

Now stop reading forums and go back to work! ;)
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Post by pomps200 »

Thx for feed back I just starting on the journey Off producing
but always looking forward to learn more.
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