erase the post please
erase the post please
sorry link down
Last edited by pomps200 on Mon Nov 12, 2007 6:41 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Hmm, your track is far from perfect.
There's way too much reverb! I won't further discuss the sound quality because I don't have decent speakers right now.
The synth sound is a bit cheesy, but used efficiently could be OK...
The voice samples are cool! Maybe a bit too much "behind". Have you listened to "Propaganda" by Brian Aneurysm?![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
The biggest problem is the rhythm. Boom, tshak, boom, tshak. The synth is always on the beat. Boooring!
But there's hope in the very end. An echo brings a slight variation. IMHO it's the way to go. Listen to "Freakside" by Shlomi Aber if you want to know what I mean... And suddenly I felt this track could become interesting!
Now stop reading forums and go back to work!![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
There's way too much reverb! I won't further discuss the sound quality because I don't have decent speakers right now.
The synth sound is a bit cheesy, but used efficiently could be OK...
The voice samples are cool! Maybe a bit too much "behind". Have you listened to "Propaganda" by Brian Aneurysm?
![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
The biggest problem is the rhythm. Boom, tshak, boom, tshak. The synth is always on the beat. Boooring!
But there's hope in the very end. An echo brings a slight variation. IMHO it's the way to go. Listen to "Freakside" by Shlomi Aber if you want to know what I mean... And suddenly I felt this track could become interesting!
Now stop reading forums and go back to work!
![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
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