my opinion is that this track would be better with less elements...i understnad the hectic nature of this....but in a way its a turn off to me....what would i play after this?...im not sure....or even before it for that matter....so maybe its just a matter of taste...and this song doesnt take any turns....no surprises...that make sense?....yeah...i feel once i heard the first minute of this song...i didnt need to hear the rest....u know what im sayin?
thanks
Ben Ryser - Maxism
This is rocking, good stuff - doesn't sound amazingly dissimilar to the noises i love making too ![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
Things I might change... a controlled slow vibrato on the wiq-oW noise to keep it directional.. at the 5:18 drop, i'd maybe change the mood of the whole tune, bring it down to just a gigantic ripping static snare and the kick, and have it 'fight' with the previous components of the tune - so that the previously prominent components of the tune (the synth, the samples) become very short release, crushed, and randomized to sound like they're battling to get back in past the snare, and eventually do - when the tune ends.
![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
Things I might change... a controlled slow vibrato on the wiq-oW noise to keep it directional.. at the 5:18 drop, i'd maybe change the mood of the whole tune, bring it down to just a gigantic ripping static snare and the kick, and have it 'fight' with the previous components of the tune - so that the previously prominent components of the tune (the synth, the samples) become very short release, crushed, and randomized to sound like they're battling to get back in past the snare, and eventually do - when the tune ends.
Jow,
Really Like your style man!
Like it when it has al the crazy weird sound etc
Nice job!
Peace out Peperoni
Really Like your style man!
Like it when it has al the crazy weird sound etc
Nice job!
Peace out Peperoni
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