[moody/mnml/house]suli.belarto-"Seditionary"

suli.belarto · Post by **suli.belarto** » Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:21 am

Track titled "Seditionary"
appreciate the feedback.

http://myspace.com/sulibelarto

thanks in advance.

amphetax · Post by **amphetax** » Sat Apr 14, 2007 10:52 am

not my cup of tea, although i'm sure there is someone who likes it tho'.

suli.belarto · Post by **suli.belarto** » Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:39 pm

fair enough....thanks for the listen, anything you think may add to the groove?

amphetax · Post by **amphetax** » Sat Apr 21, 2007 12:57 pm

Sorry, haven't noticed your replay before.
Ok. here's the "complete" review.
1st of all, my personal opinion is that claps (if not extremely modified) are outdated and for sure sound corny. So i would add a bunch of effects on them or smthn. 2nd, that shizophrenik synth is great for intro, but i kinda feel it's not good for a sequence (at least not through the whole song).
Whole song is kinda linear, and pretty much nothing is happening. Ok, it needs to be mnml, but i can sence a lack of variations through the piece.

Song surely has potential, but you haven't made the most of it. There's a lot of place for improvement.

sauce · Post by **sauce** » Mon Apr 23, 2007 12:26 pm

I like the claps and the synth, but I agree that it evolves really slowly. Still, I can get down to it as a nice background/atmosphere.. It doesn't really need to move so fast, you know?

suli.belarto · Post by **suli.belarto** » Wed Apr 25, 2007 8:54 pm

i have modified the track since thanks for the feedback...I retitled the track I added a vocal "Smokemacheni"